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theinconceivable1 replied to the topic Ash Fall Writing Snippets(hopefully) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 2 months ago
@kari-karast: skim read it, start was better, too many italicised words in my opinion ; D Still I dont think this shoud be your START, give me some action! IDK, something to hook me (but it was better ; D)












