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  • The Fledgling Artist replied to the topic Please roast me! in the forum Critiques 7 years, 9 months ago

    @itisastarrynight Thanks. 🙂 My instant response was “Nuh uh!” but I can see now that is an area that needs some work.

    @e-joe3 Thanks for your legnthy imput! (I enjoy long responses!)

    I can see that I do exaggerate the V shape of the neck a little too much now. So that was helpful.
    I also agree that my shading was “messed up” haha. The fact that I did it under a couple of minutes is still a poor excuse, and I need to learn how to shade better. Coloring is a weakness of mine.

    I can see that all my guy hair does tend to be a little too samey, and will strive to make them more individual in the future.

    @slisby That’s okay! Thanks for the critique- I really appreciate the extra input. Better late then never. 😀 I find it interesting that everyone seems to really like that 4th drawing. It happens to be among those I dislike. Haha. The eye issue being one of them! What happens is I tend to draw my eyes kind of fast (to make them feel more fluid and lifelike) but sometimes my hand slips and eyes get wonked up. (So yeah, you’re correct.. Something is for sure off with that eye.)

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