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@azeline-d @everyone I think we could just change that exchange of dialogue a bit to allow him to carry her out himself. That would probably be the simplest option, rather than introducing another character.

Also, I’m thinking that changing the story to present tense like the aforementioned short story winner did might be a good option. That way we can put the memories in past tense and avoid awkward tenses/confusion. If no one has any objections to that, I can go ahead and change it.

I’ll work on fleshing out the draft this afternoon, and then hopefully tomorrow we can finish up the editing. In the meantime, if anyone has any ideas and could post them here or write something on the doc, that would be amazing!

Let’s give it our very best, guys! *cheers*