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  • Steward of the Pen replied to the topic My very short prolouge in the forum Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago

    @wishingwell13 Oh, a chorkney is a giant flightless bird from The Wingfeather Saga. 🙂

    I’d say if you’re going to write in first person, definitely do Jaydon so it’s not confusing to the reader. If you decide to write in third, that opens up your options to pretty much whoever you want. That is, if you keep the prologue as-is. Considering Jaydon’s personality, however, his would be an interesting POV, when you see the inner thoughts that no one else does due to his social awkwardness. He seems like a protagonist to me 😉

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