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Dragonwing753's profile was updated 7 years, 5 months ago
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Dragonwing753 replied to the topic Opinion on a Peter Pan retake in the forum Peer Review 7 years, 7 months ago
Fellow Ereki,
After much blood, sweat, and tears, I have finally gotten a new portion of my story down. I have pretty much re-written it, so I hope that you enjoy it. Agian, this is only a portion of the novella I plan to write, and if you find anything that you think needs correction, I would welcome your ideas. Thanks for all your help and…[Read more]
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Dragonwing753 replied to the topic Opinion on a Peter Pan retake in the forum Peer Review 7 years, 7 months ago
Thanks for all of the help!! I’ll update you guys soon.
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Dragonwing753 replied to the topic Opinion on a Peter Pan retake in the forum Peer Review 7 years, 7 months ago
Thanks so much Sarah! I was having a hard time pinpointing pretty much all of those things, as is obvious in the story, and you gave just the thing to work on!
Snaps
P.S. I like the name Inkdragon. It gives a certain flare
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Dragonwing753 started the topic Opinion on a Peter Pan retake in the forum Peer Review 7 years, 7 months ago
Hey guys!
I was wondering if I could get an opinion on my retake of Peter Pan and Neverland. So far it’s about a group of old people stricken by Alzheimer’s who return to Neverland. I’ve only covered the first two characters, and I need suggestions on whether or not I should continue with the “saving Neverland” theme.
Here’s the part I’ve got…[Read more]
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Dragonwing753 replied to the topic Introduction Thread 2.0 in the forum Events & Guild Maintenance 7 years, 7 months ago
1. What’s the genre and a (brief) summary of your current WIP?
The genre of my WIP is fantasy. I’m trying to remake Peter Pan, and instead of children, it’s all the old people coming back to Neverland and trying to save it. The weird thing is, most of the older versions have had cases of Alzheimer’s, but have mysteriously recovered with no l…[Read more]
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