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  • Sir Leeds replied to the topic Burning (Character Sketch Poem) in the forum Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago

    Hi @emma-starr !

    I agree with @rolena-hatfield on this one. He’s made some bad decisions, but there’s an attraction to someone who’s good and in a “world of light” so he tries to bridge the gap and (it seems like) he fails.

    From the line “But I’m too ruthless to be tamed,” I get the vibe that he’s not willing to give up his dark ways to get what he wants, so I see him as a kind of selfish person who’s used to taking things by force or sheer will power, and I think that’s why he ultimately fails.

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