Servant of the One and Only God

Hi Cindy, I loved your poem! And I found both encouragement and strength in it; so thank you.

I think God had you write this for me Kate. Thank you. And I thank God for what you have written. It gave me chills, I was moved by it and I hope I can learn from it. I desire to become more than the rut that I have fallen into. And I need God to make me into a temple that he would be willing to enter and to reside in. Thank you so much Kate.

Wow! Gave me shivers! Well done, it really spoke to me so thanks.

Wow Gabrielle….that was great. Only after I read that Arron’s heart clenched from killing the lion did I get struck with the realization that Justin was the lion. My mind was drawn back to the part where Justin hoped that the counselor would appreciate his sacrifice. That hurt. A lot. I thought he was feeling guilty for calling the lion and the…[Read more]

Thank you Michael for this piece. I really connected with your poem.

Thank you so much Katherine. I don’t even know what to say!

So beautiful! So true! And something I need to remember. Very encouraging.

May God Bless you soo much for reaching and touching my heart with this simple and yet precious truth!

Wow…very moving. I was saddened when the man lost his child and then his wife. In a book I’m writing a similar situation occurred; and so when I read your poem I was struck with the resemblance between the two.

I hope that didn’t come off in a bad way. I really enjoyed your poem.

I really enjoyed and connected with your poem; especially the part that says “Today I can’t make my lines connect And I strive alone in the corner of the barn Waiting for something to catch No one here to read my words”. And this part too actually: “And I’m ready to give up My strings are Breaking, breaking, breaking Oh my soul”. Very well wri…[Read more]

Really enjoyed your poem Cindy. Good job. *happy face as I give you a double thumbs up*

Well done. I enjoyed your poem a lot. Rain is such a blessing especially when it’s dry and your garden doesn’t want to grow. No moisture=no food=very very bad! 🙂 Thank God for rain!

Chelsea wow! It was an amazing story full of emotion and relationships that were beautifully balanced and it is in my opinion a masterpiece. That being said…WHAT HAPPENED!?! I loved it but the suspense! Did Jamie die? Did she live? Ahhhh!!! 😉

Hi Kendra, I’m totally with you in regards to Where The Red Fern Grows. Man! That book just gets you. You’re touched by the dogs love for Billy and their sacrifice and deaths just gets you in the heart.

First off I’d like to say that I think these are great tips (I especially like the popping your story through contrast section) but that’s only if you already know the art of making a character funny. Some of my favorite books include humor and I was wondering if you had any tips on how to write humor? I would love to be able to write funny…[Read more]

Thank you Brandon for the insight into how to write a good death/kill scene. I wrote a story in which on of my main characters died and so when I just read your post I tried to see if my character’s death did what it should. I think that it did, but we’ll see when it gets published. (hope my story death will be moving and won’t cause riots) 🙂