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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Advice on art buisness? (TTRPGers welcome) in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 19 Sep 2023 19:48:15 -0400</pubDate>

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				<pubDate>Mon, 11 Sep 2023 18:09:47 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks!</p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Advice on art buisness? (TTRPGers welcome) in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 11 Sep 2023 04:25:17 -0400</pubDate>

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				<pubDate>Mon, 11 Sep 2023 04:24:44 -0400</pubDate>

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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Advice on art buisness? (TTRPGers welcome) in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 11 Sep 2023 04:02:43 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Here are some of my personal OC&#8217;s that I&#8217;ve done</p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Advice on art buisness? (TTRPGers welcome) in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 11 Sep 2023 04:00:52 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Whoops lol</p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Advice on art buisness? (TTRPGers welcome) in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 11 Sep 2023 04:00:22 -0400</pubDate>

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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Advice on art buisness? (TTRPGers welcome) in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 11 Sep 2023 03:59:09 -0400</pubDate>

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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Advice on art buisness? (TTRPGers welcome) in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 11 Sep 2023 03:56:49 -0400</pubDate>

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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Advice on art buisness? (TTRPGers welcome) in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 11 Sep 2023 03:55:13 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Whew! Got it to work&#8230; kinda lol</p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Advice on art buisness? (TTRPGers welcome) in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 11 Sep 2023 03:54:46 -0400</pubDate>

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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Advice on art buisness? (TTRPGers welcome) in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 11 Sep 2023 03:44:51 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I tried, but alas, I&#8217;m not very techy, I&#8217;ll see if I can jerry-rig a solution from my phone</p>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 11 Sep 2023 03:43:58 -0400</pubDate>

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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Advice on art buisness? (TTRPGers welcome) in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 11 Sep 2023 03:28:18 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>thank you!</p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Advice on art buisness? (TTRPGers welcome) in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/105082/</link>
				<pubDate>Sun, 10 Sep 2023 22:06:43 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Also, how do I post pictures? I&#8217;d love to show a bit of my art style, but I don&#8217;t know how.</p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 started the topic Advice on art buisness? (TTRPGers welcome) in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/105081/</link>
				<pubDate>Sun, 10 Sep 2023 22:00:04 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi everyone!</p>
<p>I am looking to try my hand at a buisness where I take commissions to draw people&#8217;s DnD/TTRPG characters for them, but i don&#8217;t know what social media platforms I should use, or if people would be interested in this.</p>
<p>I have absorbed a lot of Dnd media, but I haven&#8217;t had the chance to play yet, so, what would players be interested&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-105081"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/105081/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104989/</link>
				<pubDate>Sat, 19 Aug 2023 05:46:24 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Cool! I&#8217;ve actually migrated more into a vaguely anime/semi-realistic style over the years myself, and I used colored pencils a lot for a while, but I found myself gravitating toward watercolor as time went on.</p>
<p>I totally get it! my writing started out as disjointed scenes of daydreams I had, but as time went on I started to write&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104989"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104989/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104986/</link>
				<pubDate>Sat, 19 Aug 2023 00:04:24 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Hi Zee! welcome!</p>
<p>I am <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/scoutfinch190/' rel="nofollow ugc">@scoutfinch190</a>, I too write and draw and am currently learning digital art on Krita. Having drawn traditionally all my life, this is a big learning curve though lol, but I&#8217;m getting the hang of it, vector stuff is a big struggle though&#x1f923; (vector means it&#8217;s not made of pixels, so you can zoom in infinitely w/o&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-104986"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104986/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Any Artists? in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104946/</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 07 Aug 2023 01:45:36 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you guys so much for the advice!</p>
<p>My husband wound up going behind my back and surprising me with a wacom cintiq 32&#8243; pro (i think) it&#8217;s been very nice, and I&#8217;ve been learning my way around Krita with it! (I would post a drawing, but alas, I don&#8217;t know how lol)</p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Any Artists? in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104907/</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 20 Jul 2023 09:05:58 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>it does! thank you so much!</p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 started the topic Any Artists? in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 19 Jul 2023 19:33:03 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi everyone!</p>
<p>I&#8217;m kinda just throwing this out here because I think there&#8217;s some aspiring comic artists on here?</p>
<p>I&#8217;m wanting to get into digital art, and I am getting seriously interested in the Wacom Intuos Pro Large. I was curious if anyone has had experience with it? If so, your opinions?</p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 12 Jul 2023 03:13:27 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>thank you!</p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190&#039;s profile was updated</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 01 May 2023 00:55:16 -0400</pubDate>

				
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 posted an update in the group Fantasy Writers: I found this poem I wrote a while ago... enjoy!


Harmless [&#133;]</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 26 Mar 2023 20:34:26 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I found this poem I wrote a while ago&#8230; enjoy!</p>
<p>Harmless but not Armless.</p>
<p>Be careful when you make a wish.<br />
Armless, I sought the witch.<br />
I brought as payment a fish.<br />
I asked for arms in my despair,<br />
Forgetting to tell her the specifics,<br />
And now arms grow from my head like hair,<br />
And it looks quite horrific.</p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Comic recommendations? in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 09 Jan 2023 08:35:14 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Thank you! I&#8217;ll be sure to check those out!</p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103866/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 28 Dec 2022 04:39:18 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you for reading! This is all I have so far as I&#8217;m trying to figure out how to get Marian out of this situation, I had a plan originally, but it didn&#8217;t make sense for the characters involved.</p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 28 Dec 2022 04:30:33 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>She sat at a metal table, cuffed to it. She felt her hands shaking as she looked up at Leo. “Why am I here?”</p>
<p>He nodded. His face unreadable. The silent treatment.</p>
<p>“Can you explain the collar?” she began sweating more.</p>
<p>“I don’t like the collars, but they’ve started using them to prevent captive Enteks from using their abilities. It’ll shock y&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-103865"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103865/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 28 Dec 2022 04:29:20 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>“Well I guess I know where Jake got his personality from.” Tammi said, “Is Paris even his real dad?”</p>
<p>“He isn’t.”</p>
<p>Tammi raised an eyebrow, “Really?”</p>
<p>“Jake’s father divorced Vigga years ago.” Marian touched the necklace, as if on instinct, “She remarried quickly.”</p>
<p>Tammi raised both eyebrows, “Was I supposed to know this?”</p>
<p>Marian shrugged, “Jak&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-103864"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103864/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 28 Dec 2022 04:27:17 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Back at the apartment, Tammi wasn’t lounging around like she usually did, instead, a panel on her thigh was open and she was tinkering with some wires.</p>
<p>“What’re you doing?”</p>
<p>“My reaction time’s a little slow in this leg… an undergrounder trying to break into an old lady’s house almost got away.” Tammi muttered. There was a spark of electricity an&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-103863"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103863/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 28 Dec 2022 03:07:57 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>At the gym, again. Marian’s feet pounded as she dashed on the treadmill, she wiped her forehead, puffing. She briefly patted her pocket, the necklace was still there. If she wore it, it would stay on better, but no, that would be too much.</p>
<p>“Marian?”</p>
<p>She stumbled, the treadmill shutting off as she caught the rail. “Leo.” She caught her breath, “&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-103862"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103862/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 28 Dec 2022 03:06:35 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Marian’s second energy drink went flying as someone tripped her. Her arms flung forward, and she turned it into a somersault. She straightened her hoodie, picking up the bottle. “Waste of money…” she muttered before striding away.</p>
<p>“Aren’t you gonna do anything?”</p>
<p>“No.” She hopped onto a treadmill and began to run, already regretting changi&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-103861"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103861/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 28 Dec 2022 03:04:14 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Marian straightened on the couch. Rubbing her eyes. news was off, and Stumpy was yell-meowing. She got up, rubbing her sore neck. She’d found it was easier to fall asleep lately, but the sleep she got wasn’t restful.</p>
<p>She shrugged on a fresh set of clothes, took a brush and smoothed out her messy hair, cringing as she realized she needed to cut&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-103860"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103860/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 28 Dec 2022 03:02:14 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Also, as a quick heads-up, if you see a word that looks like this: dViggaive &#8212; that&#8217;s because I used replace to swap names on a character who was originally called Eris for Vigga, (not sold yet on the name, have to find another eventually) but Word decided to replace any and every place Eris could be found, including where it goes inside derisive. Sorry!</p>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 28 Dec 2022 02:58:52 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Marian boarded the tram, rubbing her temples. She shouldn’t’ve left. That woman could’ve been pretending when she said she was his mother. Maybe the times she’d seen Vigga on screen her appearance had been so retouched that she looked older in real life than the artificially young personage. But even the pictures Fabian had of her on his watch s&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-103858"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103858/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 28 Dec 2022 02:49:07 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Here&#8217;s part two!</p>
<p>(However, as a forewarning, there is a part in this installment that while it is dialed back, Jake contemplates suicide, and also, Marian doesn&#8217;t eat much (not in an anorexic way, in more of a &#8216;I don&#8217;t notice that i need to eat&#8217; kind of way) Just wanted to inform you as a courtesy even though I know that it&#8217;s not necessarily&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-103857"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103857/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 28 Dec 2022 02:28:09 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ahh I just realized that I forgot to italicize some of Jake&#8217;s thoughts! So sorry!</p>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 28 Dec 2022 02:26:42 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Part two in a bit!</p>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 28 Dec 2022 02:26:09 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Jake gasped, coughing out droplets of water. He rolled onto his back, the blizzard had passed, and the distant sun cast its heatless glow as it sank under the horizon.  He sat up, dusting a thin layer of ice off his clothes. How long had he been unconscious? The unfamiliar peaks turned vivid red in the fading light, and he brought his knees up t&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-103854"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103854/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 28 Dec 2022 02:23:30 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A scraping sound pulled Jake into consciousness. After floating in a limbo between sleeping and waking, his gaze focused on a dark ceiling with little golden spores floating in the air. Where was he? Then he recalled the fight with the thrid, and a shudder went down his spine… had Paris found him after he failed? What would he do to him now? As h&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-103853"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103853/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 28 Dec 2022 01:56:49 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So sorry for the wait! here&#8217;s pt 1 revised</p>
<p>You don&#8217;t have to do an in-depth critique, I doubt I&#8217;d ever publish this, and if I did, I would probably just make it a webtoon or comic of some sort. In short, just let me know what you think! Thank you for reading!</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>He&#8217;d never killed a monster before. Jake took in a breath, trying to ease his&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-103852"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103852/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Comic recommendations? in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103845/</link>
				<pubDate>Sat, 24 Dec 2022 00:53:25 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/ragnarok/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ragnarok</a></p>
<p>Thank you! I&#8217;ll check it out!</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/this-is-not-an-alien/' rel="nofollow ugc">@this-is-not-an-alien</a></p>
<p>That&#8217;s ok! I&#8217;ve actually been interested in seeing that anime!</p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Comic recommendations? in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 23 Dec 2022 10:31:18 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you! I&#8217;ll definitely be looking into that!</p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 started the topic Comic recommendations? in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 23 Dec 2022 06:16:58 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey everyone!</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t know how everyone will feel about this, so I&#8217;m sorry if I hurt or offend anyone as it&#8217;s not my intention &#8212; I&#8217;m simply trying to stick with my conscience.</p>
<p>So, I&#8217;m looking into making webtoons, I was wondering if anyone has any good comic recommendations because the only ones I&#8217;ve managed to find always wind up having random&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-103834"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103834/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 23 Dec 2022 05:48:09 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>But I DO plan on sending the stories! It&#8217;s just taking me a while.</p>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 23 Dec 2022 05:47:41 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So sorry this has been taking a while, writing&#8217;s fallen by the wayside with the holidays. It&#8217;s been really busy.</p>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 18 Dec 2022 05:44:45 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Awesome! I&#8217;m reading through them and giving a few more final tweaks before I send them to you&#x2764;&#xfe0f;!</p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 17 Dec 2022 00:01:58 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve been working on rewriting parts 1 &amp; 2 so they&#8217;ll make more sense together and with the rest of the story so far, would you like to read what I&#8217;ve got so far?</p>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 16 Dec 2022 23:30:18 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You&#8217;re welcome! I&#8217;m so glad I could help!</p>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 14 Dec 2022 02:37:56 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I read it! I left some notes, i really like it and it&#8217;s really interesting!</p>
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				<title>ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic No idea where else to post this, but I need help in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 14 Dec 2022 00:54:11 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/ethan-leonard/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ethan-leonard</a></p>
<p>Sorry that I&#8217;m so late!</p>
<p>I know a guy who was in the Army, and he strongly encourages you to do a lot of research, which you seem to already be doing (I wish you the best of luck!)</p>
<p>From my own experience with this guy, on your question about language and cold-blooded killers:</p>
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<li>You can avoid cursing, but soldiers will insult and&hellip;</li>
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