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@obrian-of-the-surface-world

Thank you for the tip!  That would work a lot better than what i currently wrote. I know Jake is technically waking up in a strange scenario, but it would probably be better if he didn’t struggle and waited to see what would happen.

Again, thank you for the fighting tips! They are certainly one of my many weak spots and it’s helpful to be shown what needs correction.

@this-is-not-an-alien

It’s alright! it won’t hurt me anymore lol. I was part of a homeschool co-op’s English class (I later learned that it was more intense than a public school’s AP class). The teacher was really sweet and truly doing her best to prepare us for college, but it was still a lot… especially since I had no plans to go to college.

If you want to share spoilers, that’s ok by me. I know it’s also handy if you’re not sure something would work etc. And for some reason tragic backstories can be a little… fun?

I’m so glad you liked it! (I totally understand the plethora of emails etc. by the way, it’s no fun. take as much time as you need to respond 😊)