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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
so, I believe the Shrike has finally discovered Liorah, and he may or may not be rather smitten…
So, @everyone, yes, Liorah does have a love-interest in-story, but I decided to temporarily erase that from existence so I can figure out how Liorah reacts to having a crush, like Yila and Lorcan are doing.
It’s going to be chaos, she’s so oblivious.
I have no idea how flirting works irl so I’m just going to pass that one off to Liorah lol
LOL, dude, you think I do? I’m making this up as I go along XD The fact that Liorah is stupid and oblivious makes that easier XD
This took an incredibly long time because I’m trying out a new style with Saskia! It took a while to get into her mindset, plus she’s not very well developed yet
Also, I wrote random portions of this kind of late, so some of it is definitely not going to be written as well lol
I think it was really well done! I really enjoyed it!
He’s staring straight at us – big, inky eyes peeking out from soft curtains of black curls.
Basil?
And just like that, I can feel my whole chest squeeze in a knot. He’s sitting all alone, eyes soft and forlorn, lips ever so slightly pulled to the right. It’s a real pretty look, but I can tell he’s bored out of his mind.
It’s like the second paragraph and I can already tell she’s smitten XD
and he did indeed lose it, its so very tragic that his handsome features are now on full display, unfortunately for everyone they must now endure this, especially Yila…
I think it’s safe to say Liorah isn’t impressed XD












