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  • Rose replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago

    Ahh yeah, I didn’t quite think that one through although I tried to convince the stubborn characters you needed Pawns to leave the room but that didn’t work so, say, Pawns provide hints, clues and also in the next room they have to fight so they need score an army or something?
    Or say each player, character etc has to get like five Pawns with various skills to make a team to beat an unspecified next trial through a maze, so the next event could be like teambuilding!

    That sounds awesome! I’d love that!

    Oh that’s a plan! They could spend all this time trying to solve the goose’s magical properties and then the Shrike just like vanishes with it and everybody’s like “…” and the Castle just kinda rolls her eyes and tells them the properties and they get on with the next trial lol! I think that could work? What’s your vote

    I like it! Go for it!

    @everyone

    Hey, y’all, school started this week, I’m still struggling to get back into the swing of things, so sorry if it takes a while to write another post. 😉

    Just a quick something to move y’all along!

    Kongar

    “A goose, what do you mean?” The stranger asked. Even Sloane was looking at me as though she had no idea what it was.

    I laughed out loud and Chantara snorted disdainfully.

    “You don’t know what a goose is? Where are you from where there are no geese?” I asked.

    I shot Chantara another mocking look. Her jab at my past had been annoying and I was going to pay her back for it.

    “Well, farm girl, tell them.”

    The thinly veiled insult had the hoped-for effect and Chantara bristled.

    “Tell them yourself.”

    I raised my eyebrows but didn’t reply, waiting for her to answer.

    She gritted her teeth and answered, slowly.

    “That–” she flicked her wrist at the fat poultry, “Is called a goose. They’re the most vicious waterfowl on this side of hell. They have no inherent special powers unless you count aggression.”

    I noticed her fingers had small cuts on them and some bruising was already appearing.

    “Speaking from experience, goose-whisperer?” I asked, cheerily.

    Chantara tossed her head and glared at me haughtily. I couldn’t help laughing. She really had tried to catch the goose and it had backfired.

    ____________

    Also, I’m thinking about pulling out Chantara pretty soon. Sooo… if anyone’s character would be developed by a bit of murder… go ahead XD I actually really want to see how Kongar will react.

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