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  • Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic Always Been, Chapter One in the forum Critiques 8 years, 3 months ago

    @pookiemonster

    Sorry for the delay in reply! I’ve been out of town. 🙂 Thanks so much for giving this a read!

    The characters do fall into those age rages so good job 🙂

    Haha! I was thinking of renaming the island so this is great motivation to do so. Apparently I like names that start with K 🙂

    I’ll be working on tiding up the beginning. I appreciate the feedback because after I’ve rewritten something, like a hundred times, I get to the point where I don’t know what to do with it anymore 😀

    I can’t think of any questions as of now, but if I think of anything while I’m tiding I’ll let you know. 😉 Thank you!

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