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  • Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic Dark Father in the forum Critiques 8 years ago

    @archer360 You have no idea how much you just made my day 😀 Thanks so much for the feedback!!

    Your description of Evlynn is pretty spot on to what I imagined so that makes me happy.

    OR the note fell into the pool of light

    Yes. Just yes, yes, yes. You have no idea how you just tied a really cool plot element together. I might just do it. 😀 *happydance* #spoilers lol.

    There were a couple parts that I felt were more telling than showing

    *nods* Thanks for the honesty! I’m really bad at this when I’m like “but reader, you’ve never seen anything like this before! Let me tell you all about it”

    I appreciate your time! If any other thoughts come to your mind, don’t hesitate to comment again. 🙂

     

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