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Haha, wow, surprise ending! Nice. I bet you had fun writing that. And a good moral, too 😉

Sure, there are things that could be polished and the story could be better (as all could!), but the heart of the story is solid, the theme well-crafted in it, and the emotion is real. That’s what makes a good story, and the ability to do that makes a good storyteller. Keep up the good work, Alana! For whatever my opinion matters, I think you’ve got what it takes.