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@katja-r
I have really enjoyed reading the chapters of your book! The one thing I noticed was at the beginning it said:
The gun fired and I leaned forward in my saddle.
After the previous chapters, when you said the gun fired, it gave me the impression that someone was shooting at them, so I was a little confused when they started talking about racing. You could say:
The starting gun fired and we were off, I leaned forward in my saddle. I had to win.
Other than that and the things the others pointed out, I’m really enjoying reading your book!