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  • ProfessorSJB replied to the topic Random Short Story (If you have the time..) in the forum Critiques 8 years ago

    @jane-maree

    Thank you for taking the time to read it! Yes, I definitely need to work on passive voice…I’m glad you liked it.

    @faith_blum

    Thank you for your comments! I sort of wrote it in one writing, so I could also take the time to review it.

     

    I hope that I can post other short stories as they come by here. And thanks once again!

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