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Alright, Guildmates! Voting is closed and we’ll be using @morreafirebird ‘s piece to prepare a submission for the contest. 🙂

You may want to repost the link, Audrey, and tag the members in it so it will be easy to find.

We can now begin commenting on the submission: inputting editing suggestions and ideas. Let’s leave some of the minor corrections for later and focus on the description and storytelling. How can the piece be improved? What might it be lacking? Are there any parts that are confusing or that seem to contradict each other? Does the story leave you with any unanswered questions?

Let’s prepare for war, Avensers! 🙂