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  • Brian Stansell replied to the topic Audio Cinema in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 4 months ago

    @this-is-not-an-alien

    Hi Cathy,

    I did post the Scene 2 follow-up to the first scene you reviewed.  Just curious what you thought about it.
    Were you able to get a new laptop?

    I like the idea of implementing the passive and active voices like that, that should be really fun to see especially tied to the character arc!

    I tend to label each scene with a title, so this one is called “A Meeting of Monsters” and I believe you will hear more of an active voice as well as me “altering my voice” to that of…well, you’ll see. 😉

    Cheers!

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