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I will say this though, in answer to question 2, I think the characters are clear and Chloe is a good main character.

Also, so far I don’t think I’ve seen much on that theme. I wouldn’t have guessed the theme was anything like that if you hadn’t told me, but I guess the story is only just begun.

The card game was cool, but it was long and kind of interrupted the story. I’m assuming it is some sort of foreshadowing or is important later on, but if not, I know it is cool, but I think you should have left it out or shortened it. But, that’s only if it isn’t important to the rest of the story.

I keep thinking the story is taking too long to get to Creation Day. It seemed like this holiday was coming up really soon, and it seemed like she should meet her sister soon, but of course that doesn’t really matter. I’m sure all these interruptions are important, and you are doing that purposefully. Anyways, that’s all I have to say!

Great story!