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@jenwriter17 If it’s an either/or thing, we should definitely go with the second story. I just thought I should put in a note for the future that the first story is better, in case you wanted to publish it somewhere else or something.

I mean, if there was a way to include more sun without taking so much of the rest of the original story out, that would be good too. *headscratch* But I’m not quite sure how to do that, and even if I did, it’s not my call, because it’s not my story, heh.

@faith_blum You posted while I was typing. Erm, the original had the prisoners being taken out to actually see the sun, and that was lost in the revision. I would vote to put that back in.