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You just take the simple paragraph, expand on it and make it your own, then leave another paragraph to be expanded upon. The goal is to make simple descriptions better (or maybe get help from your fellow writers with lame descriptions in your writing that need fixed). See the first post of the thread.

For example, for the last paragraph I gave the thread: “Next: The seagull flew over the levee, ignoring the city that relied on the levee for its only means of protection from rising water.” there are a number of points that could be better described. What is the levee made out of? Who is observing the seagull? What does the city look like? Etc.