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Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Time to write a death scene *evil laughter* (Guild Wars #2) in the forum Announcements 8 years, 5 months ago

@devastate-lasting I just looked over what you wrote and left some comments. I really like the piece! My main confusion was about what he did with his last “one” and why he regretted it. I think emphasizing why his friends were so important to him (what was his past like?) and providing some very exact details on that would strengthen the piece as well. Great job! 😀