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  • Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 8 months ago

    First of all … QATAR?!?!???? *cries*

    Second of all — I have too many tags to look through at the moment, so I’m just going to write. If you need to tell me something, now’s the time. 😅

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    RÚAN

     

    Everything was swimming.

    Rúan saw Qatar crumple with a spear lodged in his chest. He saw Niarok stagger back.

    But the sounds were all blurred together.

    Gritting his teeth, Rúan brought the hand holding Leaghadh up and planted the tip into the floor, using it as traction to haul himself onto his knees, gasping.

    “Hey Rúan.”

    He froze. Slowly looking up, Rúan stared into the eyes of an … otherworldly-dressed bear of a man.

    “Hit me in the nose,” the man commanded.

    Rúan shuddered as a wave of white-hot pain rippled throughout his leg. “Wh-why?” he demanded. “I’ll do no such thing.”

    “It’s just a punch,” the man said. “You saw what happened to the man when he refused.”

    Rúan’s eyes drifted to the body in the corner. Quin was standing over it, looking pale and sick.

    Turning back to the bear-like man, Rúan narrowed his eyes. This has to be some trick.

    “Why are you asking me?” Rúan questioned.

     

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