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  • Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 6 months ago

    OSLØN:

     

    Someone approached. Someone unknown.

    This young man had brown hair — a rather common colour, in my opinion — and wore a mysterious expression on his face.

    He reached for Rúan’s hand, pulling him up into a standing position. My half-brother’s eyes fluttered.

    “Who are you?” I demanded of the new person.

    Then Rúan winced, his knees buckling slightly. I caught his shoulder, then leaned in to hiss “Don’t get bitten again. If you do, you’ll die.”

    “Wh-why …” Rúan rasped, “do you … suddenly … care … ?”

    I DON’T care.

    I huffed. “Because it’ll make me look bad if you do.”

    Turning to the man, I snapped, “I asked your name.”

     

    @emily-waldorf made it simple! 😊 If you’d like anything changed, go ahead!

    Also

    They were faintly similar, though they looked like fire and ice, flaring autumn and frozen winter, side by side.

    THIS IS SUCH A COOL DESCRIPTION

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