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Olivia Giordano replied to the topic Spanish Poetry, Anyone??? *pleasepleaseplease* in the forum Poetry Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@scribbles That is really well done! A few things…
Me olvido de como decir
I think for that, you don’t need the “de” in that line. For these lines as well…take out the “de”.
Me olvido de las palabras.
Me olvido de tu lengua.
Me olvido de mi lengua.
Anndd…I think, instead of “Pero yo olvido” it would “Pero lo olvido”. This is where it isn’t a direct translation.
But overall, this is beautiful! I love it, and I can relate to this poem so well, especially when I struggle to say everything I want to with Spanish friends. There’s a language barrier that’s soo hard to overcome.












