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Linz replied to the topic Needing Advice – My Characters Reactions in the forum Characters 8 years, 1 month ago
Audrey had some great points. They also might be hesitant with him after initial happiness as they decide how to tell him his sister died. After all, he wanted to save her no matter what even if it meant going to prison or being killed, so they might be worried Joshua would react violently when he finds out. Just one more layer to consider. (I also don’t know what arc he is going through or what part of that arc he’ll be on when he gets back home so I’m not sure if you need the threat of more conflict here. 🙂 )












