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@h-jones LOOK AT ALL THE PRECIOUS ART BABIES. The picture of Kisette and their little family,.. I JUST CAN’T AKSFJDHKSD <3

Characters – Yeeeess! I’d love for Kisette to have their happily ever after! But what kingdom would Kester rule first though? And yes to Clarion and Gisette becoming even closer friends when they get captured!. I’d love for them to notice that they can be a great team even though they’re both quite different girls! Also, Basil becoming Kisette’s advisor would be so great! KESTER SINGING TO GISETTE THOUGH, D’AWW<3

World – Ooooooh I LOVE the prison idea! The symbolism in that is great tbh. WHAT IF THEY ACTUALLY WERE SEND INTO THIS PRISON FOR MISUSING TECHNOLOGY. And that’s why the king is so opposed to it and never tried to use it to find the mainland because he’ll know it won’t ever work if they use it to get out.

AND YES to the people “Peace come upon this household” when entering someone’s home. That beautiful really!

Plot – Hmm, I kinda like that! Would have to see how that would work out for the rest of the story though! I do definitely like for the evil dude (who desperately needs a name) to just keep on having to need more and more of these crystals. Maybe the crystals could even start to slowly lose their power because the misuses them for his technology? These shiny blobs are becoming more and more complex xD

BUT THE GIRLS FINDING THE MAP TO THE MAINLAND THOUGH. YESSSS! I’d love for that to be the moment that attacks the guy! Kinda at the climax right before he saves her from falling.

OOOOOOOOOOH BUT WAT IF IN THE CLIMAX the bad guy either attacks or pushes Gisette away, thinking he’s killed her. However as he notices that the squad has the map he focusses his weather machine (or some other electronical device) on them, threatening he will kill them if they don’t give it to him. And as he charges his machine Gisette jumps through the air, pulling the crystal out of his wings and as they both fall Kester dashes to save her.