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  • Libby replied to the topic Edmund's Sunset – a poem in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago

    Just worked on a new, more hopeful ending.  If you have any feedback, I’m still up for it!

    The quiet mountains shadowed over
    Where she last had danced abroad—
    In the sands, there grew a clover,
    Solitary in its grace.
    And in that place of crumbled sod
    Sweet heaven cast a blissful ray.

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