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@warrenluther04

Hey!

Your plot is really good and intrigued me pretty quickly, however the prologue was extremely short so it didn’t capture me like it should have.

And the news was also a bit choppy and off. I think there should have been interviews with people, a bit more of a serious tone to capture me and the other readers.

Otherwise, I think with some editing this would be good, because like I said, the plot does intrigue me.  Good luck!