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@h-jones  Hey, sorry if I came off a little strong.  I have a tendency to be really blunt.

Actually, I got the imagery of being inside a courtyard or something, and there’s nothing wrong with betwixt or inside, whichever word you want to use.  (Perhaps it will give the image that the speaker wishes to stay inside his “comfort zone” so to speak.) What I was trying to get at was that — you begin by saying it’s afternoon, giving the impression that it’s sunny daytime, but in the next couple lines the moon is out.