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THIS IS AMAZING

ME WANTS MORE

Not sure if I like the king, but I trust him. One bit of critique would be that I was confused as to the setting – you said they were in a room, but you also mention grass/dirt/etc. multiple times. Since rooms tend to have floors, I was confuzzled. Were they in a tent? Does this king prefer grass to wood or stone? Do I just not have enough context?

All in all, WONDERFUL JOB!!!! Your characters are empathetic and your point clearly made. TAG ME FOR MORE