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@katthewriter Hello! I just finished reading your story. I really enjoyed it, especially that prologue! I would’ve left comments in the document, but I don’t know much about Word so I couldn’t figure out how XD But anyway, the biggest tip I would have would be utilizing the ‘show don’t tell’ rule and cutting down on needless words to make the story more tight and powerful. 😉 Thanks again for letting me read it! 😀