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  • JennytheFaun replied to the topic Flash(?) Fiction in the forum Critiques 6 years, 9 months ago

    @toklaham-veruzia Wow, thanks for all the awesome feedback! I’ll definitely keep it all in mind as I edit the story more. Did you have any ideas for how to make the ending less predictable? That seems to be a common issue in most of my stories XP.

    It looks like a few tags didn’t work, so I’m tagging @maddie-jay @i-david @kr-lalonde @samberg0 @writingwgrace and @kori again. Hopefully they’ll work. And hopefully I’m not tagging you twice, cause that would be annoying.

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