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  • Jane Maree replied to the topic Prologue: The Ember Dies in the forum Critiques 7 years, 9 months ago

    @steward-of-the-pen As the insufficient substitute for you awesome guildmaster, I thought I’d drop in here to have a look. And can I just say, I LOVE the beginning! The way you set the tone and emotion of the story using the weather and setting to build up the tension of the story before it’s even really started. Excellent job. 😀

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