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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Lesson 20 : Pacing to the Paragraph in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 6 months ago
@jade That’s so cool! I really love how you can tell he’s jotting it down as he goes. I can almost imagine he’s running while writing it, desperately hoping it won’t be needed. Really well done!
I’m kinda curious now. Are you writing the whole book in journal form? Because that’s the most realistic journal-story I have ever seen. *nods* Impressive!












