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@r-m-archer, thanks. I stink at commas. Funny story…a few years ago, my mom threatened to pull the comma button off my computer because I kept splicing commas. So I stopped using them until the fall when I learned a little better.

@esjohnson, thanks. the inspiration actually came from me thinking about the opening, but I was like half awake half asleep and boy that hook made me roll right out of bed.

Maybe I need to post the whole story…for editing. I do want it to be its best.