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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
I think it’s time to change to first person.
KHALON
Aydin didn’t believe me, and he wasn’t trying hard to hide it.
“If you’re one of those whatever you call it, what’s your ability?” He said mockingly.
What had I done to deserve this? For once I wanted to just let the world know what I was thinking, but since that would probably be the last thing I do, I kept my thoughts to myself.
“I used to have extra fast reflexes, but I seem to be losing that ability,” I replied in a polite but tight voice. I couldn’t keep on going on like this or I would die at the age of twenty-five.
Don’t apologize. This is good for Khalon.












