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  • Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago

    @rose-colored-fancy

    That’s what makes them so fun to read! @everyone I realized I’ve been writing Aydin wrong for quite a while. I got too stuck feeling sorry for him and trying to make him likeable that I rather overdid it. He’s coming across as a sweet innocent martyr which he is NOT…he’s going to be taking a turn for the unlikeable and I don’t know how that will turn out but be prepared! And thank you for coming to my Ted talk XD

    Wait, Aydin is a selfish, sarcastic, unlikeable, deceitful person?! Why did you have to make him so lovable? This side of him is going to break my heart! It’ll also really annoy Khalon.  I think he was hoping that anyone who succeeds at keeping an angry person from beating up someone else was a nice guy.

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