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H. Jones replied to the topic MC MARY SUE!? in the forum Characters 8 years, 1 month ago
@wysteriacampion Stumbled across this, and I think I can help a little bit.
Honestly, this character sounds extremely naive to me. Naive to what others are actually thinking about him, naive to what other people are really like – if he’s so caught up in how he thinks people see him, he isn’t focusing much on their true character (unless, of course, everyone actually does think he’s a braggart and such).
Also, perhaps self-conscious and low-key judgmental. Expects too much of himself and of other people, and is constantly judging other’s character (or what he perceives of it) and also his own.
He sounds like a very appealing character over all. I like him a lot. Royalty, is he? Quite intriguing! He has lots of great character in him, too. My interest is piqued.
Hope this helps. 🙂












