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@k-a-grey Thank you so much for the feedback. (: I appreciate it, genuinely. Would it make more sense to write “An afternoon outside the walls?” Implying that you’re venturing outside? (When I first wrote it, I imagined it being inside a walled courtyard, if that explains that visual. xD)

So you think the second stanza works with the last line of the poem? I never thought about that! You’re right! 😮 I was just writing out random words, hahaha xDDD