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Hey guys! So I came across this suggestion to make sure your MC’s personality is actually what you want it to be.

Basically, because authors know our protagonists so well, it can be easy to forget to actually show their personality traits in action. I’ve heard that one way to combat this is to ask people to read your first chapter and tell you what they think your protagonist is like. Then you can see how well their impression matches the character in your head.

So, if you have time, I’d really appreciate it if you would read my first chapter and tell me what you think Kesem’s traits are. 🙂

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VCBeP1nc1czrCD-oRVpAHCG7Q43mP88eAiRa5BIwxo0/edit

Then, if you want to, you guys could post your own first chapters and I’ll do the same for your MC’s?