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Erynne replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 9 months ago
Dominic crept his door open and glanced down each hall franticly.
He stepped out, shut his door and took off running down the hall. Again, it was to the left, the way he came. The hall ended in a familiar staircase.
He remembered that once he got up the stairs, it was a hall filled with paintings then ended with two doors.
The two doors stared him down. One was made of a very light colored wood, the other very dark.
The light colored door is the one he had come through when he entered the castle. It led to some bedrooms, but ended in the entrance to the castle.
What was behind the dark colored door was a mystery.
The wood had an odd print on it. It did not look like any other wood the scientist had seen before. He leaned forward and felt the wood’s imprint.
As his fingers brushed down the door, Dominic noticed something. Beneath the door, a glow appeared. A glow with a million colors and an interesting affect.
Intrigued, Dominic turned the knob and pushed. The door stood still. He pushed harder but nothing happened.
Something was pushing against the other side.
Dominic used his entire body weight against the door but it still wouldn’t move. The intense colors still crept out from the bottom.
Dominic let go of the knob and noticed something. It’s not moving he thought. The only movement from the knob is when he was turning it.
He thought desperately for an answer to his problem. The door was clearly unlocked.
The answer struck him in an instant.
It’s a force.
You are more than welcome to tell about my own character’s actions. It sounds like you have a plan in mind and I don’t want to mess it up 😉 Also, I’m not very good at this XD












