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Emma Starr replied to the topic Critique For The Fledgling Poet? in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@the-fledgling-artist I love the vibes of these poems! <3 Also I think you have natural feel for word choice…very very nice. 🙂
In your future poems, think about experimenting with line-length and flow of the poem, being intentional about the pacing.
When you decide on a rhyme scheme, before you begin the poem, try writing out a bunch of words in that rhyme that you like the flavor of. Then dive into the poem.
Explore assonance (internal rhyme by basically repeating a sound like, “i could scale the sky, riding high”) It can really transform your poetry and make it much more aesthetically pleasing and //poetry// sounding.
These are just a few ideas to help you grow. 🙂 I would love to read the next poem you post! Please tag me!!












