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  • Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago

    Aaannnd @denali-christianson I’m back to fix it now. 🙂

    Qatar (cont.)

    (this is right after his contemplating which countries she could be from):

    Angelborn. It sounded strange to say it, after so many years. He took a deep breath. It was part of him. He had wondered, when he was a child, if he really was of the lineage of angels. Now he knew he wasn’t but the same spell seemed to be scattered over the name that had always been, and a faraway look came into his eyes.

    Then he looked back at Evie. Her mouth was a little open, her eyes very large. and pretty. He hated himself for even thinking it.

    “I have a brother. Well, two brothers, but Quin is only half a brother. And then there’s Grace.” As he said his sister’s name he smiled a little. She’s only half a sister, too, but it hardly matters.

    “We live on Ferdina Island–largest in the Circle–we’re…farmers.”

    [author’s note: the country they live in is the Vegada Circle: a circular formation made up of 6 Islands that are a little like states or provinces.]

    He stopped suddenly.

    I’ve said too much already. He looked into Evie’s hazel eyes. I don’t know what it is about this girl that makes me talk so confounded much.

    “What about you?” he almost snapped. Then, in a gentler voice, “Do you have a story?”

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