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Elisha Starquill replied to the topic Critique for my poem “The Sky Realm” in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
@ariella-newheart – I’ve never actually *studied* poetry before, so I won’t be able to give very helpful critique, but I will say that as a general reader, I absolutely LOVED this poem. The imagery was exquisite, the rhyming and rhythm pleasant, and it overall made me feel as if I was wandering in the skies.
One little typo: I think you mean ‘crowning’ instead of ‘crowing.’ 😉
Good luck on the competition!!!












