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@steward-of-the-pen – Thanks for taking the time to read it! I really appreciate it. 🙂

I’m glad you like the prologue! It was a lot of fun to write.

Ok, that sounds good. I was worried the chase might be a bit confusing, but your suggestion will help a lot.

Thank you! Siblings are the best. 😉

Ooh, yes, that’s an excellent point! A lot of the time, I’ve noticed that Maeri feels kind of…off, and I think weaving in goals, as you observed, would improve that.

Your feedback and thoughts were extremely helpful. I’ll be sure to use them throughout future chapters. Again, thank you so much! 😀