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Eitan replied to the topic Short Story Critique in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 1 month ago
The story isn’t like anything I’ve read, but I love it! 🙂
At first I was sure that it’s an allegory for Christ. It doesn’t seems so, but Corian is definitely Christlike.
I was quite confused from the characters’ age, though.
Hmm, I’m sorry if I offend you, but… Are you Chinese?












