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thank you for taking your time to read it .

I am seeing it only now. I see the space errors are more than grammatical errors which i didn’t expect XD .

well show and tell is really good , Ill try to do it in my future stories .

and since 4th wall breaking is sort of a new idea ,its a bit clumsy , ill try to perfect it .(you are not the first one to say ” there are a lot of it breaking my focus .”)

I am glad you liked the plot and the story .

again thank you for spending your time to read this .