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I like to add to my critic a little more not so important things.

First I had exaggerate the scene like it’s a girl looking to paint then I would give her a artist cap then paint stains on her shirt .

This about painting and I see only a color palette there ,I would exaggerate it by making it a paint bucket with some buckets spilling paint ..

And also get rid of the bookshelf and the tree , cause those are unnecessary things which doesn’t add much to the scene …

Thank you .