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I see that the diagram is a lot like fit everything into a specific area . There are lot of blank space which u can use to stretch out ur diagram and make it more visible .

The second thing is the color code , there are lot of mixing of colors on the top ,stick to a specific color code like warm color or cold color or tertiary colors … Yeah this one is a little intermediate and not many understand it .

The third thing is that there are lot of things on the top , although people might appreciate you for the detailing and amount of work it does not seem appealing cause there is lot of things that a person can’t focus on . So get rid of some objects and give space .

The final one is sort of  related to the previous one . But this is the major one , Idk the theme of that image . I can think that the theme is painting but the things on the top like camera ,ship , butterfly etc….which have no connection to each other confuses me . If had taken a specific object genre like electronics or scenery or colors then painted the top Portion then I could know the theme of the image …

If I had painted that in the theme of painting then I would get rid of all the cameras and ships and paint only the different colors or  with seas and sky’s .

I hope that was a good critic , cause I never done it before in respect to art 🙂